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Post by Spellmizer on Feb 6, 2017 12:11:18 GMT -7
new here first char dwarf hunter
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Geckilian
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Post by Geckilian on Feb 7, 2017 8:48:46 GMT -7
You're missing the character background and description from your application post.
The pdf should be uploaded to the Dragonsgate dropbox.
Your profession could be termed a bowyer and fletcher - job titles for those who make bows and arrows respectively.
HD should be listed as d8. With a con bonus of +1, you should have 9 hp.
You're missing background skills.
You're missing Favored Class and FCB.
You've spent 129.4gp Your remaining wealth should list 6 silver rather than 10.
The worn equipment area is listed as being for magic items. Your hide armour, whilst no doubt lovely, isn't magical.
You're in medium encumbrance, so suffer a total -3 ACP and a max dex bonus of 3 - your traits don't reduce the ACP from encumbrance and the worst value is used between encumbrance and armor.
Once the above is corrected and the sheet uploaded to the dropbox, feel free to post here and I'll have another look.
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Post by Spellmizer on Feb 14, 2017 19:45:51 GMT -7
Character Name: Faldin Algal Character & Description: A very stout dwarf for him bieng so young. He has a kind heart for all animals. But understand s what he needs to do to eat. Also he has always had a knack for making weapons and armor of all kinds. What do you look like, how do you dress, etc. A Young Dwarf of 30 years old. Dark Brown shoulder lenght hair beard and muststach. He stand almost 4 and 1/2 feet tall and has a small belly. He adors a wide brim hat and a hide shirt over his explorers outfit. Weapons carried Short bow and a Dom Dergar "Chain Flail for those who doesnt understand dwarf. Background Information: Algal is a well know name in the dwarven comunity for Masterwork weapons and armor.He got kindness and fondness for animals from his Druid mother and his fighting prownes and blacksmithing Boywer and Fletcher Skill's. Who is your character? Why is she arriving in Rook, or if you live there, what do you do? What are your characters life goals? Faldin is an aprentence at a local Smittty shop . He picked up skill's from a local hunter at a young age, enjoyed the outdoors and the animals. And his beloved Betty , his Velociraptor wich was a gift from his parent s when he left home last year to come to the big city for work. All year all he can dream of is adventure sure hes visited the forest out side the city but hasn't ventured deep in. Attachments:Faldin Algal.pdf (690.76 KB)
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Geckilian
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Post by Geckilian on Feb 16, 2017 12:12:58 GMT -7
You've now spent 133.9gp, so should have 6gp and 1sp left.
Your changed your point buy puts you at 21 points. We use 20.
Once you fix those issues and reupload post here to let us know.
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Post by Spellmizer on Feb 16, 2017 12:37:51 GMT -7
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Geckilian
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Post by Geckilian on Feb 16, 2017 16:30:56 GMT -7
There we go.  Please make a character thread in the player haven. |
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