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Post by pixiprincess1212 on Jan 31, 2017 23:54:52 GMT -7
Hi, uploading my first character for review. Backstory to come.
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haksanlulz
Approvals
Filthy deviant plagiarist
Posts: 191
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Post by haksanlulz on Feb 2, 2017 17:16:27 GMT -7
Can't have Greasy Palms as traits that affect wealth are banned you also cant have use magic device and diplomacy as background skills, you can find the list here sleight of hand is one already so you only need to invest one more point i say more more point cause you're missing a skill point, you have 8 as a rogue + 2 from your int +2 background skills +1 from your favored class bonus. you should have 13 points and you only have 12, so point one into a background skill and you'll be good other than that you look good
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Post by pixiprincess1212 on Feb 12, 2017 21:51:04 GMT -7
Corrections made.
Backstory:
Vivian doesn’t know a lot about where she came from.Her earliest memory was of a white haired woman getting her out of bed in the middle of the night, getting her dressed and then putting her and a small bag of her belongings into the back of wagon that took her into the night.
She was left at a small tavern that the traveler passed by and thats where she stayed. The owner of the Tavern took her in and allowed her to work for her keep. Growing up there she learned many things but, most importantly, she learned how to behave around and with all races and types of people. She was skilled at getting people to like her, to trust her, while being able to read them well.
She had gathered over the years that her mother was of Taldan decent, which explained her slightly olive toned skinned and could only guess that her father was elven or half elf. She has lilac hair and crystal blue eyes.
One traveler in particular, who frequented the small tavern, took notice of her and persuaded her to leave the only home she had ever known to go with him. He taught her how she could use her natural ability to charm and converse with other to get vital information from others, or to talk the two out of a tight spot. She spent 8 years with him. It took her that long to realize that he was just using her for his own gain. She left during the dead of night after she discovered that he intended to kill their current target. She warned the young noble and left town. She was okay with bending the rules to get what she wanted or needed but murder in cold blood was crossing the line and she wouldn't be a part of it.
With no friends of family to speak of she wondered on her own a bit before meeting Slate.
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Geckilian
Leadership Council
Empires Mierely require time.
Posts: 1,026
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Post by Geckilian on Feb 15, 2017 19:20:28 GMT -7
Looks good after the changes. Minor note, as we use our own setting Taldor doesn't actually exist, but feel free to look through the region pages on the wiki and pick another city/town name that stands out to you. Please make a character thread in the player haven section of the forum.
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