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Post by starlady on Jan 8, 2017 18:51:09 GMT -7
Miranda 'Mirri' Thedan Mirri grew up in a little village in the far north Eotren. Shortly after her 26 birthday, the village was raided by bandits and she ended up wondering the forest lost and alone. On her 3rd day alone she is approached by a little dinosaurs and since that day they have been inseparable. They spend the next hundred traveling together rarely staying in one place. Mirri is a tall slender elf with pale skin and long white hair. Her clothes are old but well tended with lots of repairs from the damage of travel and time.
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Post by bioa10 on Jan 10, 2017 1:52:49 GMT -7
A few small things: - I got 28 gold remaining after your purchases.
- I don't see why you have a +3 to attack with your rapier.
- Your familiar's will save should be 2, because of this "For each saving throw, use either the familiar's base save bonus (Fortitude +2, Reflex +2, Will +0) or the master's (as calculated from all her classes), whichever is better." which means that for it's will save it uses your base save since it is higher than the familiar's base save.
- Your familiar always has half of your max hit points as their max hit points, meaning your familiar should have 4 hp.
If you think I made any mistakes feel free to point them out. Once you have fixed these things please re-submit.
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Post by bioa10 on Jan 11, 2017 18:01:06 GMT -7
Looks good.
APPROVED.
Please create a character thread in the characters section of the forum and post in the character roster thread.
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