CRC
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Post by CRC on Jan 7, 2017 15:35:37 GMT -7
Description: A sweet lovely lady till you upset her. Background: A sweet lovely lady raised by monks high up on a mountain. She grew up ever knowing her parents or where she came from. All the monks have told her, was that she was found outside their sanctuary one cold dark night as a baby a basket. in the basket was a note with her name on it and a simple necklace in the shape of a bow and arrow. As she grew she was raised by the monks as one of their own, she looked up to them all as fathers. She learned to defend herself but most of all the found her love of the bow. Even the monks with all their training were quickly surpassed by her skill with the bow. As some of the monks grew old and some died she began to wonder when she is still looking so young since she has never left the sanctuary she has never known much of the outside world. She has never heard of Elves or Orcs. So the master monk finally gave her the necklace that was found with her as a baby and told her that she was and elf. Dropped off as a baby. -Character Sheet-
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Post by bioa10 on Jan 8, 2017 15:19:56 GMT -7
There are quite a few errors I found in the character sheet. - First, you put "ELlf" as your race which I assume is supposed to be Elf instead.
- It would be helpful if you filled out the Size, Height, Weight, Age, Alignment, and Languages fields on the character sheet.
- It also seems that for your attributes you put only a +2 to wisdom which implies that you are actually a half-elf and not an elf as an elf gets +2 dex and int, -2 con.
- You can't gain the monk AC bonus while wearing armor.
- Dimdweller is not a trait, it is an alternate racial trait for elf and half-elf from what I can see. Also don't add the +2 to the skills since it is a situational bonus and is not always active. Also Dimdweller doesn't give 60 feet of darkvision.
- I can't find "Passed Armor" on the d20pfsrd. Suggestion: Don't use armor, you're a monk.
- Tip: Inquisitor does not allow you to qualify for Arcane Archer since they cast divine spells.
Please fix the sheet and re-upload the new version.
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Post by bioa10 on Jan 8, 2017 16:19:17 GMT -7
The latest version seems fine.
APPROVED.
Please make a character thread and post on the roster.
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