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Post by champofobs on Sept 26, 2016 15:00:05 GMT -7
Character Name: Magnus Flick
Character & Description: Magnus is an above average height Human. He wears a lot of earthy tones, dark reds and tans when in his civilian clothing. When he anticipates being in combat, he wears all black, save for his long crimson neck scarf. He has a youthful looking visage, as his tempered will has mitigated a lot of the aging effects often seen among those who spend a life on the battlefield.
Background Description: He is very light hearted but extremely professional when the time comes. He always asks for compensation for his time, even if the reward is trivial. If he deems someone to be in need, he will help them but not at extreme expense to himself. He won't get himself killed for something he doesn't believe in. Other than that, Magnus has an extreme sense of wanderlust, hoping to start his very own band of mercenaries.
Magnus's arrival in Rook is a direct result of his desire to seek employment. He is currently in the hopes of providing services to a liege lord, and ultimately wants to start a band of Mercenaries the world abroad.
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haksanlulz
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Post by haksanlulz on Sept 27, 2016 10:48:35 GMT -7
You have some problems with your character sheet. You're missing Appraise, Knowledge (local), Linguistics and Perform, you also have survival when you shouldn't and I'm not sure where this +1 to swim is coming from. You have two combat traits, you can only have 1 trait per type. And lastly you spent too much money, the 2 drow poisons alone put you 10 gold in the negative. If you fix those and re-upload the new sheet you'll be good.
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haksanlulz
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Post by haksanlulz on Sept 27, 2016 11:51:55 GMT -7
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