xemadus
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Post by xemadus on Aug 31, 2016 5:15:48 GMT -7
History: Delarik Lyrakyiae has been a wanderer for as long as he can remember. At a very young age he was left alone due to unknown circumstances, with nothing more than a simple flute serving to keep him company. As he grew older, he found that his music had the power to change people in subtle ways, usually for the better, and it was this ability that lead to his adoption. While wandering around a small town one day, the local guard came under attack by a group of bandits. At first, it appeared as if the bandits would emerge victorious, but Delarik began playing his flute, trying all he could to empower the guard. Emboldened by the impromptu performance, the guard gained that extra edge they needed to push back the bandits. When the dust cleared and the sound of combat was long faded, a member of the guard took the boy under her wing and trained him in the art of swordplay. Unfortunately, his proficiency with weaponry left much to be desired, though he discovered a strange talent with the Estoc, as well as a well of power within him that he could channel through his blade. In addition to this, years of training in the martial arts helped him to come in to his latent bardic abilities. Now, with both sword and music serving to embolden him, he took off once more to find both adventure and fame. Appearence
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xemadus
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Post by xemadus on Aug 31, 2016 5:37:48 GMT -7
Just realized I forgot about traits (adopted > helpful halfing, and magical knack bard for the curious) . Fixed them on my sheet, but I'll save the second upload for after someone checks my current upload. Also noticed I forgot to fill in spells per day. Fixed that too.
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Post by bioa10 on Sept 7, 2016 8:47:04 GMT -7
I can only see one thing in addition to what you said in the previous post. I believe you should have 25 gold left, you spent 80 of 105. Estoc 50 gp + Studded Leather 25 gp + Buckler 5 gp = 80 gp spent.
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xemadus
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Post by xemadus on Sept 7, 2016 12:19:35 GMT -7
The last 5 gold was for my violin.
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Post by bioa10 on Sept 8, 2016 12:41:53 GMT -7
Ah, gotcha. You had your equipment list empty so I thought it was just the weapons and armor. You also have not filled out all the characters details but that is only a small problem.
After you post the new sheet it should be good.
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xemadus
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Post by xemadus on Sept 9, 2016 14:50:35 GMT -7
Uploaded the fixed sheet.
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