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Post by cougarknight18 on Jun 9, 2016 21:32:04 GMT -7
Character Description
His eyes are blue. His hair is short, black, and spikey. His body is burly and is leathery. He constantly wears a large helmet that has a dragon patern. All over his armour and weapons is covered in his master's crest of a black lotus.
Character Background
When Dante was young his village was raided and was orphaned. After the raid the local lord found Dante and toke him to his home to be a bodyguard because of his large size. After Dante arrived at the lord's home he was soon taught in the way of the eclipse. Dante learned that he must never make light unless it is necessary. Dante learned that he obey those above him and force obidence below him. While Dante grew his master and others realized that Dante was not bright. So his master sent Dante out to Rook for him to go out into the world and learn about it. So Dante left only with his gear, horse, and a book from his master with several notes to inform him of the world and a place for Dante to write down information of the world and then return to him. Hopefully smarter.
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kenpui
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Post by kenpui on Jun 13, 2016 9:02:58 GMT -7
Hey there, here are a couple thigns i saw while skimming your character sheet: You're over your point buy, feel free to use this tool to calculate itYou lack background skills (feel free to add 2 background skills) You're over your starting wealth, please use the average provided by the class (please specify the type of craft you have) Feel free to add your con to the starting Health Pool please notify us when these small tid-bits are fixed
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Post by cougarknight18 on Jun 13, 2016 15:45:54 GMT -7
Fixed it. And if I didn't get the copper and silver right can I just drop it off and just use the gold
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kenpui
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Post by kenpui on Jun 15, 2016 7:41:51 GMT -7
Hey there just checked it again and your skills are still unfixed, your class provides 4 + int modifier and on top of that you hvae 2 background skills to dish out. A total of 6 skills trained. I don't see where your favored class bonus went? it usually goes into either 1 more hp or 1 more skill.
please fix these things and you should be good to go!
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Post by cougarknight18 on Jun 15, 2016 12:38:30 GMT -7
Fixed it
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kenpui
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Post by kenpui on Jun 15, 2016 17:50:52 GMT -7
Hm... Looks good enough, Approved. Please make a post in the character haven thread and character roster. feel free to bother a GM until you are given player privileges.
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