c1b3rshad3
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Some men aren't looking for anything logical... Some men just want to watch the world burn.
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Post by c1b3rshad3 on May 14, 2016 15:18:27 GMT -7
Vorheez is son to Half Orc father and human mother who were both mercenaries who were killed. He was raised by his tribal Orc grandparents. His beatings were numerous at the hands of the Orcs. Not considered worthy of tribal membership he was sent away. He went to Rook, hoping to find out more about his parents.
Vorheez does not bear the tribal tatoos that most tribal Orcs would because he wasn't deemed worthy of them. In their place are scars from the many beatings he received for not being as strong as the Orcs. He wears chain mail and his whips hang at his waist.
Dropbox file title: Vorheez-5.14.16-L1.pdf
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kenpui
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Post by kenpui on May 25, 2016 8:11:34 GMT -7
Hey there, sorry for the long delay most of our approvals team are having a great time in their lives, here are a couple things i guess, - you have no age
- you have no alignment
- you have no languages
- you are missing two background skills
- from what i can see you only spend 156 gold on equipment, though i'm assuming the rest is going to consumables that i cant see
- get some clothes(though that's mostly optional)
Aside from these small tidbits you should be good to go! hope to hear from you soon.
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c1b3rshad3
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Some men aren't looking for anything logical... Some men just want to watch the world burn.
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Post by c1b3rshad3 on May 25, 2016 9:30:00 GMT -7
Thanks. Resubmitted.
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kenpui
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Post by kenpui on May 25, 2016 12:20:12 GMT -7
Looks good
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