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Post by minitaz on Apr 22, 2016 17:34:25 GMT -7
 Silence Silence is a fairly tall for a hobgoblin. He is bald and has the normal blue-ish grey skin with many scars. He dresses very formally for a hobgoblin, and presents himself with much confidence. Silence was born into a nomadic tribe from hargalond, that worshiped a tribal sun god. At a very young age, he started to show off his powers of darkness. His tribe thought of him as a cursed child, and his elders regularly beat him. These beatings just increased his physical fortitude, allowing him to acess some of his full potential. When he realized he could have a future besides being treated like a pest, he ran away from his tribe, and made his name to rook. He is a rather joyful person, but usually sees no wrong in any actions he does, and he does whatever he feels is beneficial to him, whether or not it follows normal morals (hence LE) Attachments:
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haksanlulz
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Post by haksanlulz on Apr 25, 2016 11:55:13 GMT -7
Only two things and they're both pretty minor. Racial bonuses shouldn't be in inherent as inherent in a pretty specific type of bonus; You can put them in base or misc take your pick as to which. Other thing is that the bonus from indomitable faith shouldn't be in your class bonuses as it will also create confusion, put the extra into the misc for will on the left. It's to the right of the enhance box, for some reason it doesn't have a name on it.
Other than that you're good.
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Post by minitaz on May 2, 2016 13:49:18 GMT -7
Fixed it!
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Post by kenpui on May 2, 2016 19:47:17 GMT -7
Hey there here are some things that i saw; -I presume that the gravity blast is under the assumption that enemies will always be within the 30 foot perimeter for point blank shot and thus you tallied it as +4 to hit and +7 to damage (Attack modifier is the +4 not the enhance though that doesn't really matter) -you're missing out on 2 background skills -You're stark naked, for clothing you are allowed to pick up one set as long as its under 10 gp for free fix these things and you should be good to go feel free to hop into our IRC and our Discord servers and chat with the crew, we're generally an active group |
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Post by kenpui on May 4, 2016 14:00:10 GMT -7
Yeah I just saw you update your link, It looks good to go. Approved, please make a post in the Character Roster and the Character Haven Thread. from now on please re-name your files correctly with, Charactername_date_Level  |
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