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Post by CRC on Mar 25, 2016 9:16:48 GMT -7
 First Name: Kage Last Name: no Akuma Description: Eyes: Dark expressionless Hair: black Height: 5’9” Weight: 165 Race: Human Gender: Male Age: 19 Languages Known: Common, BackGround: Raised on the streets all he has ever known is how to survive. Kage has learned to become one with the shadows in his surroundings so become invisible even in the middle of the day. Some of his humanity has left him, though from this rough way of life, he doesn't kill often but when he does he doesn't always need a reason to. Attachments:
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Post by kenpui on Mar 25, 2016 10:43:00 GMT -7
Ew a PoW and here are somethings to note about your character sheet - Your skill ranks are a bit funky you should have a total of 8 skill ranks (Comprehensive Education gives them a bonus but doesn't provide them with ranks of said knowledge skills, its not THAT op)
- Please note that exotic weapon proficiency only works on one exotic weapon, while i can see you got it for the wakizashi its not a big deal, but still just remember that it doesn't give you proficiency with any other ones
- While i do see that you got 2 weapons and an armor set where would you be holding all other thigns such as potions and misc. items, you should probably invest in a backpack
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Post by CRC on Mar 26, 2016 14:45:32 GMT -7
ok fixed
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Post by kenpui on Mar 26, 2016 14:58:40 GMT -7
Looks good to me please post in the character haven thread.  |
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