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Post by LenCole on Mar 20, 2016 15:54:51 GMT -7
Character Name: Shunryu (name taken to honor training, never speaks of his given name)
Shunryu’s father was Elven and his mother was human, at a young age his father was killed, and along with his mother and 2 younger sisters went to live in a monastery, where his mother was a cook. He took well to the monastic training and enjoyed his time there studying under Master Shodo. As he transitioned into young adulthood he started to wonder about the world at large. One night the monastery was attacked and his mother and sisters were killed. Master Shodo was severely wounded and taken by the intruders. This left Shunryu with no one at the Monastery and he decided that he would leave the monastery and search for Master Shodo. For a year he attempted to find him, however the trail as gone cold and he fears that something has happened and Master Shodo has died. This has led Shunryu to Rook hoping that he can find out more information.
Shunryu dresses in monk garb and travels light, relying on himself for survival. To honor his training he keeps his head shaved.
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Post by kenpui on Mar 25, 2016 10:35:31 GMT -7
Hey there here are some things to note about your character sheet; - You currently have 2 combat traits, please note in DG we allow only 1 of each type of trait, please change one of the traits to a non combat trait
- As a monk you only get 1 bonus feat, I'm not seeing anywhere that allows you to obtain both improved imitative and skill focus at the same time
- Your income is incorrectly calculated as the math should end up something like this;
- 75 gp from monk
- -1 gp from caltrop
- -2 gp for 10 shuriken
- -1 sp for sling bullets
- -3 gp for trail rations
- -4 gp for waterskin
- -10gp for silk rope
- -3 sp for 3 fishhooks
- -1 sp for bedroll
- -1 gp for flitn and steel
- -2 gp for a backpack
- -1 gp for mapcase
- Which should net you at a total of 50 gp and 5 sp
[/ul][/ul] Please fix these things and re upload your character sheet and if you feel like i miscalculated something feel free to tell me what I missed! also feel free to hop into our IRC and Discord servers to chat it up with the community.
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Post by LenCole on Mar 25, 2016 15:22:00 GMT -7
Thanks for your comments.
Regarding the additional feat, does not a Half-Elf get "Adaptability - Half-Elves receive Skill Focus as a bonus feat at 1st level"
I uploaded the modified character sheet for trait and money
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Post by kenpui on Mar 26, 2016 14:39:16 GMT -7
True enough, thanks for noting that! Another thing that I forgot to mention is that skill focus provides a +3 bonus so just buff yourself a little bit, huehue. Anyway your character sheet looks good to me feel free to make a post in the character haven subforum!
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