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Post by hobie819 on Feb 27, 2016 17:25:58 GMT -7
Character Name: Ganaldi Freistrom
Description: Male Half-Elf. Average Height (5ft 11in) 155 lbs. Green Eyes, Brown Hair. Wears clothing you'd expect to find from someone that lived in the woodlands. Handmade clothing made of items you'd expect to find (such as leather) in a place where cities are not rampant.
Background Information: Ganaldi Freistrom is a half elf sorcerer that recently emigrated to Rook from the western lands. His mother and father were both half elf and they chose to live their lives in the forests, living as dejected elves. When Ganaldi came of age, he realized that being looked upon as a reject from both human and elf societies wasn’t for him and so decided to branch out away from his family and visit the city of Rook to see what all the world has to offer.
Additional Backstory (unknown to the character) is that his draconic bloodline in his family comes from a dragon in the western lands centuries ago (at least 8 generations). Ganaldi is unaware of the draconic bloodline flowing through him as of yet and as a part of his character development, will likely begin to get curious when his bloodline starts to come out around level 3 with his first free bloodline spell and he realizes that he has a bloodline.
Thanks for your help!
(FYI - I uploaded the sheet the first time with the wrong naming convention - sorry!)
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rocshaajenkins
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Post by rocshaajenkins on Feb 27, 2016 21:11:22 GMT -7
You have not marked your class skills. This changes the way the PDF calculates your bonus for trained skills.
In addition, you have not allocated your 2 Background Skill points. If you search on d20pfsrd, you'll find background skills. You gain 2 extra skill points per level that can only be used on these skills (background skills).
Please mark how you allocate your Favored Class Bonus somewhere on your sheet, for ease of finding.
You did not mark the +1 bonus to UMD from Dangerously Curious.
Please fill in the Ability DCs box on page 3. This will show your spells per day and their DC before other modifiers (so spell level + casting stat).
You don't need a spell component pouch since you have Eschew Materials (yay, +1gp).
Fix these things and please re-upload with a v2 or a new date.
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Post by hobie819 on Feb 28, 2016 12:23:21 GMT -7
Should be resubmitted with today's date (28 Feb).
To be honest, I'm not sure what to do with the ability dc box. I haven't seen that on a sheet before. I'm assuming that the class bonus is 10 since spell dc is 10+ability mod+spell level but I could be way off mark.
Thanks!
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rocshaajenkins
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Post by rocshaajenkins on Feb 29, 2016 12:22:01 GMT -7
The Ability DC box is where you put in your spells per day granted by your class, as stated by the words "Maximum Spells per Day". This should be 3 for a 1st level sorcerer. Since you already changed the box to CHA (I believe that's the default anyway), it automatically calculates your bonus spells per day based on casting stat.
Also, you didn't mark your +3 bonus to Diplomacy from Skill Focus. My apologies, as I missed that the first time around.
Fix these and re-upload (everything else is correct from what I can tell).
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Post by kenpui on Feb 29, 2016 13:01:51 GMT -7
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Post by hobie819 on Feb 29, 2016 16:57:04 GMT -7
Last version (hopefully) is now uploaded =)
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rocshaajenkins
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Post by rocshaajenkins on Mar 1, 2016 0:47:32 GMT -7
www.d20pfsrd.com/classes/core-classes/sorcererThe number that goes into the Maximum Spells per Day boxes are the ones on the Table:Sorcerer table at the top of the page, not your spells known. You should have 4 1st level spells at level 1. I'd also like to point out that Sorcerers aren't proficient with Armor of any kind, so the ACP from it applies to all STR and DEX skill checks in addition to all attack rolls. Leather armor also has a 10% Arcane Spell Failure chance, which means all of your spells you cast with somatic components (moving your hands and such) have a 10% chance to fail. Is this intended? Diplomacy is fixed though. Please fix the first point I brought up and have a look over the second one, then re-upload.
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Post by hobie819 on Mar 1, 2016 4:38:08 GMT -7
Updated the spells.
The armor is correct for now. I did realize the 10% fail and the no proficiency, but at least to start out, I felt having the 2 extra AC would be worth that risk until I saw how/if spellcasters get targeted by GMs in the games run here. If it isn't too bad, taking off the armor is relatively easy to do (just not in combat).
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rocshaajenkins
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Post by rocshaajenkins on Mar 2, 2016 13:50:26 GMT -7
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