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Post by maximusmaxy on Dec 3, 2014 5:40:22 GMT -7
Character Name: Barak Steelblaze Character & Description: Aside from the usual physical traits of green skin and protruding tusks, Barak has short black unruly hair and beard which he tries to keep groomed to the best of his ability. He is well armored, wearing scale mail and equipped with a buckler and crossbow. He also wields the favored weapon of his deity Sarenrae, the scimitar with a iron holy symbol given to him by his late mother to match it. Background Information: Being born 9 months after his town was raided by orcs, Barak was forced into a life of priesthood at a young age. He proceeded to work at the church until the age of 18 until his town was once again raided by orcs and his mother died in the event. Although he had been a part of the town his whole life he was exiled due to his orc blood and no longer having any family ties. He left the town and headed towards Rook where his kind were more likely to be accepted and his skills of use. character sheet
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Post by wizardfrog on Dec 3, 2014 18:14:17 GMT -7
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Post by Gryphyx on Dec 3, 2014 18:31:19 GMT -7
Heya Max, welcome! I've looked over Barak and have a few things to point out: - As WizardFrog pointed out, please submit your PDF to the dropbox linked in the wiki.
- All of your numbers look perfect.
- You didn't choose any traits. You don't have to, but its really just a flat character bonus so there isn't any reason not to. If you're not sure what to take, any trait that bumps a save or initiative is a great default. You get two of them, but only one from a given category. If you're not familiar with them, google "pfsrd traits"
So basically, once you add traits and upload to the proper dropbox you're good to go.
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Post by maximusmaxy on Dec 3, 2014 22:21:50 GMT -7
Thanks for the help!
Updated and uploaded.
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Post by Gryphyx on Dec 4, 2014 0:46:18 GMT -7
Nice choices! That extra channel really helps with your lower charisma. And the Dawnflower one is cool. I've never noticed it before. Congrats on your first Dragons Gate character and welcome! Check you PMs for next steps.
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