ziak
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Post by ziak on Mar 5, 2016 22:35:03 GMT -7
Ziak is a Half Elf who was raised on the mean streets of a smaller city just outside of Rook (whatever works in the established universe.) He never knew his father and the only memory that he has of his mother is the image of her leaving him on the doorstep of an orphanage at the age of 3. The orphanage served as a bed and little more to the young scrap who preferred to call the streets his home. Hanging around in back alleys and dodgey side streets were what made the boy feel alive and some would say that the unsavory individuals that came with those streets were the closest things to role models Ziak had.
He began performing when him and some of the other ruffians looted a small caravan that came through town. While everyone chose to pilfer more practical valuables, Ziak took a lute and a flute as his share of the haul. Since then, it was a damn rare sight to find him without his instruments.
After performing and scrounging around his city for a quarter of a century Ziak has landed on the doorstep of Rook in search of fortune, love, and adventure.
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kenpui
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Post by kenpui on Mar 23, 2016 13:56:57 GMT -7
Hey there, some things to note on your character sheet should be - Half-Elves only get +2 to one stat as you added +2 to both dex or cha, please choose one.
- Unless you did Kindred Raised then please note that it replaces adaptability, elven immunities, keen senses, and multi talented.
- You're missing 2 background skills, as you would be getting 6 from class, 2 from int, and 2 for background skills. Please buff yourself accordingly
- Half Elves get multi talented in the racial traits that you forgot to either replace or write down, favored class is a little tab underneath your classes
- In the HD column feel free to say 1d8 which is the single d8 you get from the class, your hp should be 10 unless i'm missing some kind of HP super master, the breakdown should be 8+2 +1 from maybe a favored class bonus which you didn't set up, again buff yourself accordingly but nerf that hp pool
- The cosmopolitan feat provides you with 2 more languages so feel free to add those in the language tab, also it provides you with 2 more class skills so feel free to check mark two more
- We also have a separate trait system that you need to pick up, there not racial traits but like separate buff things so again feel free to buff yourself accordingly
- You didn't mark down initiative
- There's a Resistance tab for you, which is just a petpeve you don't really need to put the elven immunities in it
- Please also know your proficiencies though I guess its also fine not to write them down
- Please note somewhere which type of perform you got, its decently important to know for your bardic performance
- You didn't mark down loads nor did you put your equipment in the equipment tab to determine your load
- You marked down that you had 2 1st level spells known but you didn't write down the 2nd spell known from the bard spell list
Please fix these things and feel free to hop into the IRC and Discord Servers to chat with us if you have any other questions |
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