[Approved] Dusky | Sylph | Druid(packlord)

A few things:

• You have a modifier of 3 for intelligence which means that you get 3 starting languages. You can select from the Sylph starting languages and Sylvan. So either 3 Sylph languages or 2 Sylph languages and Sylvan.
• The next thing is more of an optimization question. You have very low wisdom score for a character that uses wisdom to cast spells. Was this intentional?
• Please move the stats from the inherent column to the base column, inherent bonuses are something different than the racial bonuses.
• You need to fill in the BAB, Skills, Fort, Ref, Will, and Levels columns.
• Unless to plan to multiclass you should set your favored class to Druid, which means that whenever you take a level in the Druid class you can add +1 hp, +1 skill rank, or +1/2 bonus to Kn: Nature when it is related to flying animals.
• You can move the electricity resistance to the resistances box on the right.
• The columns on the right of the trained column for the skills can be used to add miscellaneous modifiers, such as the bonuses from Nature Sense and from Skill Focus.
• Your speed is 20 ft.
• If you remove the lbs from the weight for the equipment then the sheet will add the weight together and give you a total weight.
• I can't seem to find the hand spade on the d20pfsrd, you could get Masterwork Tools for either Survival or Profession: Gardening instead. The same goes for the pruning knife, you could get another knife from the weapons page though. The Holly and Mistletoe won't have any mechanical benefit but you can keep it.
• You didn't list the spell component pouch on the equipment section.
• The worn equipment is for magic items, not normal clothing.
• You can't remove the talons for scent
• The bird should have 15 hp
• I don't see a feat for the bird
• You should fill in the Ability DCs section, and make sure to set it to use wisdom.
• The last thing is that Sylphs all come from Cloud City, there are no native Rook Sylphs.

Your bird's HP is still wrong, it should be 18 ( 8 [1st HD] + 5 [2nd HD] + 2 [2 levels of CON] + 3 [Toughness] ). 19 is impossible with your current build.

You should edit your back story here on the forum to reflect the backstory on your character sheet.

You've still not allocated a Favored Class Bonus (FCB). This is either 1 HP, 1 skill point, or an effect based on your race and class. Make sure you mark down how you spend your FCB on your sheet somewhere. This leads into my next point:

Your HP is wrong. It should be 10 ( 8 [1st HD] + 2 [CON] ). It could be 11 if you take the HP for your FCB.


Biggest Issue:
Your point buy is at 28. We have a point buy of 20. Here is your stat breakdown.



As stated above, your point buy is not very optimal. A Druid's spellcasting ability is based on WIS. Is this intentional?

If you would like some help with this, feel free to come onto IRC and ask questions. We're always happy to help.

Here is a calculator to help you set up your scores: webpages.charter.net/tedsarah/Pathfinder/utilities/pointBuyCalc.htm

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Hey there, sorry for the delayed response here's a couple more things that need to be fixed;

• Your skill ranks are a bit much, you should be getting a total of 9, in which case it would be 4 (class) + 3 (int) + 2(background) - this is under the assumption that you funneled your favored class bonus to HP which would land you at 10 hp since the math there is 8 (HD) + 1 (con) + 1 (FCB)
• While the HP of your animal companion is 18 correctly, I was wondering how you got it to be level 2 while you were still level 1? I don't see a feat nor does the Pack Lord Archetype enhance animal companion levels as your divided druid level is still 1 as the pack lord archetype doesn't add your divided level but splits it among the various animal companions you get
• your allocated funds are also incorrect as the math would end up similar to;
• • 70 gp from class
  • -4 gp for 2 spears
  • -1 sp from bedroll
  • -5 gp from spell components pouch
  • -1 gp from belt (unless you just added that for lulz, since it doesnt come with the outfit i'm assuming its a belt pouch)
  • -4 gp from waterskin
  • -15 gp from hide armor
  • -1 sp from sack
  • • this would net you at roughly 40 gp and 8 silver
  
  

Knowledge (Arcana) isn't a class skill for Druid, you get Nature and Geography. I see you got Bruising Intellect so you have Intimidate as a class skill now but if you got something so you can have Arcana as a class skill I missed it.

You got more gold than you have on your sheet, kenpui made an error. I assume he mixed up the weight of a full water skin with the cost. You should have 43 gold and 3 silver. also since the whole belt = belt pouch thing was an assumption, if by belt you meant belt you have another extra gold since that's included in the outfit and you didn't need to list it.

if you did mean belt pouch that has a weight of half a pound empty.

Jeremy's attack bonus should be +2. +1 from BAB, +1 from size.

Jeremy should also have an escape artist of 2 and fly of 9, the fly of 9 is assuming you spend the 2 skill points on raising his fly since you put down 6. i think you forgot to put in his class bonus.

other than that you're good. hope to play with you soon man

Someone should be around soon. Hang in there! There are so many apps that they can only be rechecked once someone posts that they're edited.