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Post by casualmodejeremy on Jan 17, 2016 23:12:52 GMT -7
Character Name: Arenia Archos Character & Description: Arenia is a half-elf, the daughter of a elven noble who took a human consort from a diplomatic envoy 26 years ago. The relationship was a loving one, and they treated their daughter with the respect and affection other elves denied her. As a result, she because shy but optimistic, with a voice like an angel. She grew happy and beautiful, with short white hair and shining violet eyes. She has not let her 6'1" height or strength dissuade her from more delicate activities, like the soft strumming of the lyre. In fact, her build and her looks only make her more alluring, an exotic beauty that even the elves who formerly looked down on her have taken notice of. Like her parents, she seeks the path of diplomacy...though if her voice should ever falter, it is backed by steel. Background Information: Arenia is on a diplomatic mission to Rook, seeking allies for her father's clan. His house is in a minor power struggle with a rival house, one led by a former colleague at the bard college who learned songs in a dark language not meant to be spoken. She hopes to gather enough strength, both in herself and by others, to challenge the man now referred to as the Heretic Bard, before their house destroys hers...and with it, the best Elven ally the humans have ever had.
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Ash
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This world is only big enough for one loli.
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Post by Ash on Jan 17, 2016 23:36:08 GMT -7
I'm not sure what your first level feat is.
You've got 2 AB and 2 damage listed for your weapons, but your strength mod is 0.
You're also not proficient with scimitars as a bard unless you've taken something I didn't see.
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Post by casualmodejeremy on Jan 17, 2016 23:48:55 GMT -7
Feats are Weapon Finesse and Skill Bonus (Linguistics).
Changed to a Rapier to take advantage of the Weapon Finesse; fixed the club's attack and damage.
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Ash
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This world is only big enough for one loli.
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Post by Ash on Jan 18, 2016 13:19:59 GMT -7
Looks good, just remove that extra language.
I'll also note for future readers that this was a restart of the character, going to back 0 exp and base class gold, and not an official rebuild.
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