haksanlulz
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Filthy deviant plagiarist
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Post by haksanlulz on Dec 29, 2015 4:36:00 GMT -7
I got pretty much everything in my head I just gotta figure out how to write it well. I uploaded the sheet though.
Character Name: Mork
Character & Description:
Background Information:
Mork was born to a Human father and an Orc Mother.
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Ash
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This world is only big enough for one loli.
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Post by Ash on Jan 5, 2016 12:12:56 GMT -7
I've seen a few problems with your sheet:
Starting gold for Bloodrager is 105gp, so you'll need to remove some of your items.
You have 9 rounds of rage per day listed, however I'm only seeing base 4 + your con mod of +2. Where are the other 3 rounds coming from? I assume a trait, but:
You also need your traits listed.
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haksanlulz
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Filthy deviant plagiarist
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Post by haksanlulz on Jan 5, 2016 22:01:29 GMT -7
Remade the guy from scratch. Just named Mork now, the 3 rounds were from berzerker of the society but I got rid of that now so it doesn't matter. my bad on the gold thing i was looking at a few classes when i was deciding and must've just messed up. i thought i had traits listed but in any case i've made it way more organized now so it should be in order. also i made the file name Mork 1-5-2016 L1 because i didn't know if i should put it as an edit or v2 since i started from scratch and basically just kept the name, race and class and mostly nothing else
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Ash
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Post by Ash on Jan 6, 2016 11:00:04 GMT -7
Everything looks good. Just note that wearing the armored coat will reduce speed to 20.
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